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If you've been
in the copywriting realm for very long at all, you've heard the
phrase "features vs. benefits." It's a fundamental copywriting
principle and driving force behind much of what we, as copywriters,
create. But there's also another aspect to this equation.
What happens
after customers buy your product or service? Once they've used what
you have to offer, what will be different in their lives? What will
the end results, of their buying decision, be? Getting your customers
to look at the end results of their actions can be an extremely
powerful persuasion tool that you'll want to incorporate into your
copy.
Let's look at
features, benefits and end results and see how all three work individually
and collectively to create a targeted push to the point of purchase.
Features
- The Basic Outline of Your Product or Service
Features, in
copywriting, are a starting point. They provide a basic outline
for what your customer needs to know. Features describe (most often)
the attributes of a product or service. If we're using the example
of a cordless, telephone-answering system, some features might be:
- 5.8GHz FHSS
- Talking caller
ID
- Expandable
to 4 handsets
- Selectable
ring tones
- Speakerphones
For a person
who knows nothing about cordless phones with answering machines,
this list might not mean much. It's a basic blueprint of the telephone
and nothing more.
Benefits
- Make the Product or Service More Personal
Benefits enliven
the features. Benefits make the features, and the product or service,
more personal. They explain how the features will improve the customer's
life in some way. Using the features list above, see what the benefits
might be. (The list below was taken from Panasonic™ marketing
materials and relates directly to their KX-TG5230M model phone.)
- 5.8GHz
digital system: The 5.8GHz frequency lets you go anywhere
in your house and still have clear reception without interfering
with your home network. The frequency-hopping digital technology
keeps calls secure from outside sources.
- Talking
caller ID: No need to be within visual distance of your
phone. You can hear who's on the line before you pick up the phone.
No more running to find the handset or base!
-
Expandable:
Keep a phone in any room—extra handsets cost less than other
phones and don't need a phone jack. This base unit supports a
total of four handsets. Add up to three handsets for a complete
set.
- Selectable
ring tones: Customize the sound of your phone by choosing
from three ring tones.
- Dual
speakerphones: Talk directly into the base with the base
speakerphone, while the handset speakerphone provides convenient
hands-free calling wherever you take your handset.
Benefits make
the features personal. They explain how the features will be of
use in the customer's life.
End
Results - A Glimpse Into the Future
We can take
this process one step further, however. After customers buy the
phone, and after they use it, what end results will they experience?
As asked before, how will their lives be improved? What will the
effects of their buying decision be? Let's go back to our list and
add end results as the last sentence in the benefits list.
- 5.8GHz
digital system: The 5.8GHz frequency lets you go anywhere
in your house and still have clear reception without disrupting
your home network. The frequency-hopping digital technology keeps
calls secure from outside sources. You'll have complete freedom
to talk with no interference on one of the most advanced systems
available.
- Talking
caller ID: No need to be within visual distance of your
phone. You can hear who's on the line before you pick up the phone.
You'll enjoy the ultimate in convenience with this feature. No
more running to view the handset or base!
- Expandable:
Keep a phone in any room—extra handsets cost less than other
phones and don't need a phone jack. This base unit supports a
total of four handsets. Add up to three handsets for a complete
set. Expandable phone systems are smart investments that save
time and money.
- Selectable
ring tones: Customize the sound of your phone by choosing
from three ring tones. Make your phone an extension of yourself.
- Dual
speakerphones: Talk directly into the base with the base
speakerphone, while the handset speakerphone provides convenient
hands-free calling wherever you take your handset. You'll have
the flexibility of speakerphones wherever and whenever you talk.
Do you see what
the end results have done? They've given the customer a glimpse
into the future. The feature states that the phone offers 5.8GHz
technology. The benefit goes on to explain that 5.8GHz technology
is important because it offers clear reception and safety. The end
result wraps things up by stating the customer will have a life
filled with freedom and no interference from their highly advanced
system.
Other end results
point out how the phone system will make each user's life more convenient,
how this smart investment will save time and money, how it will
conform to one’s personality and how the phone will lend flexibility
to the customer's life.
When you create
your copywriting plan, be sure to list the features and build your
benefits as usual. But, for added power, don't forget to include
end results that will help the customers visualize how your product
or service will make their lives better.
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